I think that what you wrote was actually very reasonable. But, what about this? what if you added a little content? I ain’t suggesting your information isn’t solid, but suppose you added something that grabbed folk’s attention? I mean Registration – ShareonSport.com is a little vanilla. You could look at Yahoo’s front page and note how they create article titles to grab viewers to click. You might add a related video or a related pic or two to grab readers excited about what you’ve written. Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little livelier.
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